"Homestead" by Robert Gibb is typically the one that engages the most writers. Form, rhythm, choice. Replicate. Try it yourself. Share. It works.
And Jack is a master craftsman. He composes beautifully, but he also teaches with natural expertise: humor, style, grace, intelligence, and passion. It's always incredible to see.
This year, I didn't jump into childhood with the prompt, but utilized the present...something new.
Pequannok
It's spring, 2021. My son's
in a buttoned Polo tucked
in his golf shorts & held
into place with a brown belt.
Karal leads with her leash.
It’s hard to see clouds,
but we know they’re gray,
damp, and move quickly
with the promise of rain.
Because I’m almost 50
I notice the pace he keeps
in dress shoes not meant
for walking - the ones
worn to his office parties,
He makes a salary now.
I the talking about my
parents, dad riding his
mower to the bar
while mom laces
their home with oxygen
thread and cookie crumbs.
It used to be smoke
and wise potato chips.
Because I’m almost 50
nothing looks the same.
My son’s legs are long,
shiny from the lotion,
moving quickly along
the Pequonnack, its water
parading over buried rocks
and fallen Sycamores.
He’s planned a trip to
Louisville on his own -
came to visit me and
to get some fresh air.
Time is shackled upon
his wrist like dollar signs.
It’s Friday. Both of us
need a break, this
son always four steps
ahead of me. It's like
he walks atop the trees.
I understand the path
ahead, it's straight forward
but miss the feet
that once followed me,
as I try to keep up.
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